Dear
Mr Butterworth,
I
went to see your latest play, ‘The Ferryman’ at the weekend. Due
to the array of five star reviews it has garnered, I was really
looking forward to seeing it. But, alas, I didn’t like it. I didn’t
like it at all. In fact, to be totally honest with you, I despised
it. Therefore, I am writing to you in the hope of unburdening myself
of the contempt that I feel for your play. But, before your
reciprocal contempt for this letter is expressed in the shredding of
it, l offer you the promise of a solution that will redeem your play
from being what it currently is: an episode of Mrs Brown’s Boys
transposed to 1980s Armagh.
First
though, I need to do the unburdening. I am a family man. I grew up in
a large family in Northern Ireland in the 1970s. I work with families
as a job. In my experience, there is no family as disgustingly happy
as the Carneys in the first half of your play. I get it that happy
families are hard to write, hence why soap writers exclusively serve
up a diet of dysfunctional families, but the Carneys make the Waltons
look like the Manson family. When Oisin breaks the kite, the younger
children seem a bit sad and confused. In reality, there would have
been tantrums and tears. I believe you yourself have children, so why
did you depict the Carney children as so unrealistically angelic? Was
it because they were Irish and therefore somehow different from or
better than children anywhere else in the world? I thought what you
were playing at was setting up this family idyll in the first half of
the play in order to expose it as a sham in the second half but I was
wrong. The Carneys are just all very very lovely and very very Irish.
They drink, they dance, they swear, they sing, they make Classical
references, they talk about fairies and banshees and they count their
years in harvests. They are, in fact, a British suburbanite’s
representation of the folk across the water.
And
now we come to the second half and the entrance of the Baddies. (Boo!
Hiss!) Contrasting with the lovely, lovely Irish family, you
presented us with three members of the IRA. They have had to travel a
long way to interact with the Carneys because obviously there were no
members of the IRA residing in South Armagh at the time. This
distance between the Carneys and the IRA is highly significant
because it suggests to the audience that each party inhabits its own
separate world. But that is misleading because, as I’m sure you
know, Mr Butterworth, IRA members and lovely lovely Irish families
were not different entities; they were, most often, one and the same.
After
a busy afternoon’s sniping, the South Armagh Sniper probably
returned home to his loving wife and children. He probably read a
bedtime story to the kids. It might have been about fairies and
banshees but I doubt it. After which, he probably kissed them good
night and then went to do a night shift in a factory, although there
weren’t too many of them in Armagh in the 1980s. The same was true
for the Loyalist paramilitaries. After a pleasant evening spent
torturing a Catholic in the back room of a pub, in front of an
invited audience of lovely lovely friends and neighbours, the
Shankill Butchers returned home to their lovely lovely wives and
mothers who, the following day, discussed the best detergent for
getting Fenian blood out of a denim jacket. This was the reality, Mr
Butterworth, and I’m sure you know it. (The British Army certainly
knew it when they introduced the policy of Internment but you can’t
lock up an entire community without drawing the opprobrium of the
entire world. ) So why did you present IRA members as operating
outside society when they were embedded within it? As an Englishman,
did you feel that this might disturb the cherished post-colonial
guilt of your middle class British audiences towards all things
Irish?
Or,
did you not wish to offend members of the Diaspora and their ‘Oh So
Irish’ British-born kids who you knew would flock to a play about
the Auld Country, in which Irish families are lovely and Irish
terrorists are The Other? I would genuinely like to know.
So
onto my proposed solution for redeeming your play. You will be
pleased to learn that you can keep most of the first half, except for
the opening scene which was totally superfluous anyhow. So lovely
lovely Oirish family, tiddly dee tiddly dum, potty-mouthed kids (not
funny, by the way, even if audiences laugh) etc. etc. The second half
is, however, where the changes will have to be made because, in the
rewritten version, we come to realize that Quinn Carney, the lovely,
lovely Quinn Carney, farmer and family man, is implicated in the
execution and disappearance of his own brother. For the last decade,
his whole life has been a lie. I’ll leave you, the greatest
playwright of his generation, to work out the denouement. You might
want to incorporate Tom Kettle into this somehow. In the play at the
moment, he’s just a cypher – an inversion of the Irish fool or
Lenny Small with an estuary accent. Perhaps he could be the only one
who knows the truth about Quinn. Perhaps he is really a British Army
deserter. Whatever. He needs a real back story, (currently he doesn’t
have one) and that could involve Quinn’s deceit. (Incidentally, we
had Social Services in Northern Ireland in the 1960s, so the
primitives wouldn’t have been able to adopt a lost child with an
English accent without some sort of legal process.)
I
know the play in its current form is transferring to Broadway, where
I know the Yanks will love it because it will present them with a
nostalgic view of Ireland that avoids the implication that they’re
related to terrorists but, is that what you want? Your play is a huge
hit but so is Mrs Brown’s Boys and Ed Sheeran’s Galway Girl. Like
your play (in its current form), neither of these masterpieces tells
the audience anything about Ireland or the Irish. So, Mr.
Butterworth, here’s your chance to transform your play from
something popular into something important. You have a couple of
months before it transfers to Broadway. I saw an interview that you
gave to the BBC in which you said you were a last minute sort of guy.
So two months should be more than enough time to re-write the second
half and to dispense with that awful, clunky second interval while
you’re at it. Good luck with it.
Do
not let me and my fellow Irish men and women down. Tell the truth
about us.
Regards
Mark
Hamill (Yes, it is my real name)